I was probably The One Jesus

I was probably the one who shook you as violently as the storm was to wake you, and pleaded for you to calm it.

I was probably the one who sank into the ocean when you called me to come to you.

I was probably the one who scolded the women for washing your feet with precious oil, and wasting it.

I was probably the one who had forsaken you for 30 pieces of silver.

I was probably the one who denied you three times.

I was probably the one who took you away to be tortured.

I was probably the one who spit on you.

I was probably the one who nailed you to the cross.

I was probably the one who stuck the spear in your side.

I was probably the one who wagered for your garments.

I was probably the one who doubted you rose from the dead.

Then again, I was probably the one who judged you.

Common Mistakes by Beginning Fiction Writers

There are certain things that nearly all beginning writers do. It’s almost a right of passage, to have them picked up and commented on. So to save yourself from possible embarrasment, try to avoid doing the following things. 1). Underusing the word “said”. It’s almost as if we’re scared that ‘said’ is too boring. So we use ‘demanded’, ‘insisted’, ‘commented’. Anything but ‘said’. The prob. . .

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